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Forlorn
Jan 16, 2005 20:19:38 GMT -5
Post by A2sHaTo on Jan 16, 2005 20:19:38 GMT -5
No, I'm not talking, I need my space. My heart is beating at an abnormal pace.
So confused, so frustrated.. Someone just talk to me.. Someone tell me something..
Silent and shakey, I need left alone. Steady flow of words, there's a beep, then a tone.
The phone stops ringing, the line goes dead. Hello to you, the voice in my head.
No, I'm not moving, I need put aside. Somewhere where no one else will ever reside.
So ignored, so punished.. Someone just tell me what's going on, someone just tell me something..
Desperate and dazed, I need informed. Steady rythm, back and forth, all I need is to be warned.
The people stop moving, the lines die down. Hello to you, you obnoxious sound.
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Seth
Virtuoso
Root Beer Float
Play something country!
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Forlorn
Jan 16, 2005 22:56:47 GMT -5
Post by Seth on Jan 16, 2005 22:56:47 GMT -5
Love the flow and feel to this. Awesome ending. Fantastic write!
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Forlorn
Feb 17, 2005 22:08:56 GMT -5
Post by X x K e l Z x X on Feb 17, 2005 22:08:56 GMT -5
I agree, the ending is great, keep it up!
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