Lost

[Broken hope]

lay me down to sleep.
without a soul to keep.

lost in a world based on lies.
where nothing lasts, and everything dies.

Bring me love to wait for.
To die for, to hate for.

I'm Falling asleep.
without a soul to keep.

show me pain.
lost my name.

lost with-in your eyes
Is what brought my demise.

leave me, its for the best.
i'll let you in, if you can pass the test.

everyday it will change.
you too will lose your name.

You can't fix me, don't even try.
It all falls off my shoulders with a sigh.

So here's the smile you were looking for.
The one you said you adored.

So now we have to meet again.
Forgetting we were ever friends.

We have become so different, so real, so fake.
From who we were when our names were at stake.

No matter what happens i know someday i'll die.
Someday i'll lose you, and someday i'll cry.

The sad part is i lost you again.
The girl i never forgot as a friend.

[John Barnett]

This is very good, nice work

[alostandbrokensoul]

this is really good, i like the last stanza best.

[cherryXchapstick]

i know its been said. but this is really good. i liked it alot.

[Seth]

The flow is beautiful in this piece.
Very good wording and feel...
Very intriguing and captivating write.