DeadByMorning
Novice
shattered in lies, looking up to the crimson sky...above all is peaceful
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Post by DeadByMorning on Dec 12, 2004 14:37:45 GMT -5
Suddenly, it's like a chill Every touch, it's so numb There's so much time to kill And suddenly I feel dumb.
There's nothing to do In this empty home And I feel oh so blue It sounds silent as a tomb.
I feel so blank, so hollow, Like someone shut me down In this thought, I weep and wallow In this silence I do drown.
I can't take this emptiness Not this time, I can't This time, with this heart, do not bless But it seems my choices are scant.
Someone come, make me real Touch me, kiss me Make me feel This is my begging plea.
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Seth
Virtuoso
Root Beer Float
Play something country!
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Post by Seth on Dec 12, 2004 20:55:19 GMT -5
I absolutely love the title of this piece and speaking of the poem, this is stunning, compelling and really pulls you in. Beautiful and full of yearning- wonderfully done.
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Post by X x K e l Z x X on Dec 16, 2004 16:34:21 GMT -5
This is very full of yearning, and very well written and emotion packed.
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