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Post by Broken hope on Dec 10, 2004 19:35:13 GMT -5
Now writing another rhyme He says i hope this feeling is only mine
The one that devastates his dreams A thought that always makes him scream
So silent yet so cohearent It's just a shame you didn't hear it
Everything he felt and all that he knew He found with your help, he found because of you
Its so beautiful the things he writes To just wish away those sleepless nights
You showed him that life was worth all it was You showed him that love was wonderful and God was above
Its a shame that he has fallen back into old habits The ones where he said he had had it
When he fell in love with his friend And found the heart he couldnt meand
It's funny that you saved him Then broken him all over again
He know it wasnt what you had in mind And he know hearts meand in time
Too bad right now time hasnt come And he's feeling like his friendships are done
Best friends don't know he's took the easy way Instead of saying the things he wants to say
Silence is beauty and you have it all His hearts included but he still stands tall
Just to make it to tomorrow Just to hide the never ending sorrow
He keeps the feelings inside It's so much easier just to hide
To push those who cared the most so far away When it's so hard to ask them to stay
Once best friends now strangers They still try and help, they know he's in danger
Because they watch him drink his weekends away And instead of crying he just walks away
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Seth
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Root Beer Float
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Post by Seth on Dec 12, 2004 12:03:47 GMT -5
Its so beautiful the things he writes To just wish away those sleepless nights It's funny that you saved him Then broken him all over again Because they watch him drink his weekends away And instead of crying he just walks away This is so tragically amazing. Beautiful, just utterly beautiful...
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DeadByMorning
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shattered in lies, looking up to the crimson sky...above all is peaceful
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Post by DeadByMorning on Dec 12, 2004 14:49:15 GMT -5
this really stirred something inside of me. it's a truly ingenious piece.
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