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Post by Broken hope on Dec 5, 2004 20:59:27 GMT -5
I have fixed everything that i have broken Said the words i should have spoken
Shattered the promises i have made Since this place was killing me more each day
Walking, running, anything to get away Lying, crying, anything to make you stay
Nothing works and everything broken Again, so much to be spoken
Alone and nothing to be heard All these feelings are so absurd
With you and me and a bottle of bliss With you and me and a deadly kiss
The way we lied to just be friends Another fake line so this wouldn't end
We had our fun and your still having yours Tonight i'll spend the night sitting at your door
Please come home i need to tell you i love you, i just need you and love you
But you don't live here anymore Moved away a year before
But i still sit here every night Wishing on stars that you just might
Come back and say you love me Come back and sit beside me
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Post by alostandbrokensoul on Dec 6, 2004 11:47:57 GMT -5
wow...just wow this is really amazing you capture the broken heart so well though that may not be a good thing but your poems are a wonderful thing (yeah hope you understand what im saying i just confused me self)
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Post by bloodredtears on Dec 7, 2004 11:26:38 GMT -5
this piece is very well written...and as alostandbrokensoul said it catches the essence of heartache....very well done! great job
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