boy who fell

[Broken hope]

Fateful time to denounce love
To abandon what everyone speaks of

To find my soul crying out
Burning with hate and having doubts

To walk away seems diffucult
Im starting to believe it was all my fault

It's just so easy to give up and die
When you cant stop the tears in your eyes

Let me rest now, let me rest forever
Break the bonds i made, they must be severed

I need you, i want you, i love you
Three phrases that won't be spoken to you

Back to the same old habits of slow suicide
Hoping that one time maybe i will die

To feel a little bit of what i felt
Bottomless bottles from the hand i was dealt

Drained of faith and drained of bliss
I just need to forget that kiss

Time has run out, im sleeping forever
Death has arrived, my final endeavor

One note stained from tears and written in fear
If i die before i send it it's something you need to hear

"I truly loved you and your what i needed
Without you i always felt defeated"

So many lines you don't want to read
But deep inside it's what you need

Closure for a life gone to hell
Closure for a boy who fell

For the girl of his dreams
For the girl of his dreams

[cherryXchapstick]

woah. i truly love this piece. it has so much emotion. this has got to be one of the best depictions of love. love really is the slowest form of suicide.

[Seth]

Indeed, my thoughts exactly.
This is so awesome, so brilliantly worded.
Beautiful in its tragic suicidal reverie...
Painful and deeply mesmorizing,
broken hearts and mending hearts abound
can relate to this...
Lovely done.

[alostandbrokensoul]

again you are an awesome poet and I love your poems this one is just another one added to the collection keep it up!