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Post by QueenofDarkness on Nov 3, 2004 12:31:23 GMT -5
WISH I COULD DANCE IN THE RAIN DROP THE ANTIDEPRESSANTS DOWN THE DRAIN MAYBE GO A LITTLE INSANE I WANT PEOPLE TO REMEMBER MY NAME I WANT TO GET MY HEART BROKEN RELIVE THE MEMORY TAKE A LESSON FOR A TOKEN BECAUSE THIS STRANGE GIRL IS FREE NOTHING IS WRONG WITH ME EVERYTHING IS FINE THAT I CAN SEE I'M THE PERSON NO ONE THOUGHT I COULD BE DIFFERENT...BUT ME WALKING AS A STRANGER WITH ONLY A SMILE I FEEL NO DANGER THEN AGAIN I HAVE ANOTHER MILE DON'T GET ME WRONG I HAVE A HAPPY SONG IT WON'T BE LONG BEFORE I PROVE YOUR OPINIONS WRONG I LIVE FOR A DREAM BEHIND THE SCENE TORN FROM THE SEAMS I HAVE A SILENT SCREAM TAKE A COLD SHOWER CLEAR YOUR MIND NO NEED TO SCOUR I KNOW OUR LOVE IS NOT DEAD OUR VIEWS NEVER THE SAME CAMERAS IN FACES I STEP OUT OF RANGE CAN'T SLEEP AT NIGHT I WALK THE HALLS I WAS WRONG WHEN EVERYTHING HAD TO BE RIGHT I WALK BACK TO MY FOUR WALLS I'M GOING TO DANCE IN THE RAIN THROW THE PILLS DOWN THE DRAIN I'LL PROBABLY GO INSANE PEOPLE WILL REMEMBER MY NAME
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Post by Alex'z Death Chic on Nov 3, 2004 23:25:19 GMT -5
hmmm... I dunno if you'll take it as a compliment or an insult but this made me think of Eminem... but i meant that as a compliment... im not really sure of what emotion is most dominant in this poem though...
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Post by beginswithKendsinG on Nov 5, 2004 17:40:44 GMT -5
I agree it has tone to it.
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Post by Seth on Nov 9, 2004 13:05:04 GMT -5
Indeed, Eminem came to my mind as well. Has a certain vibe, tone and raw energy to it. Awesome write.
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