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Burden
Oct 28, 2004 13:18:14 GMT -5
Post by alostandbrokensoul on Oct 28, 2004 13:18:14 GMT -5
I carry a burden a weight one my back born a mistake a happy life i lack suicides my option darness my friend unhappiness my fortune on fear i depend. I live alone in my sorrow a pool full of tears in a corner i cower consumed by my fears. I show no other option no other way out my death and comsumptions is all i think about so i choose to end it by my sorrow it shall be drowning in my tears is all i can see.
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Seth
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Burden
Nov 9, 2004 13:02:31 GMT -5
Post by Seth on Nov 9, 2004 13:02:31 GMT -5
You may cower in a corner somewhere in your room alone, but know you're not alone in being... Alone. We all (or at least most) have this happen to us and you've expressed the emotion and tragic pain well. Wonderfully written.
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