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Post by cherryXchapstick on Oct 25, 2004 17:37:54 GMT -5
my eyes shining in tears, are pleading betraying the words my mouth won't speak reaching out for a hand to pull me up each drop begging you to notice solitary me
my arms silver kissed and scarred, are screaming revealing the evidence from a struggle inside me bleeding to relieve the pain of your rejection one for every word i dare not breathe
my shoulders shaking involitarily, are warning calculating an imbalance in the cycle preparing for the consequences of impared actions the motion trying to grasp your concern
my skin cold to the touch, is whispering breaking the news of my unnoticed condition consoleing your guilty concience you're only 3 years too late
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Post by alostandbrokensoul on Oct 25, 2004 21:14:15 GMT -5
Wow thats just wow It's awesome I really liked it and felt sorta connected to it. Hope to read more!
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Post by Seth on Nov 9, 2004 13:23:31 GMT -5
Outstanding write, I agree as well. There is something very powerful about this. The words and way they've been formatted, is beautiful. Wonderfully done, I too, felt a connection.
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