In the end.

[alostandbrokensoul]

ok so its just really short and it doesnt rhymn it was going to in the beggining but didnt in the end (ha the title)(ok im wierd) anyways besides the conversations with my self im really happy with this
hope you like it!

we had so many plans for hte future
til you ended it with the pull of a trigger
you had lost all hope
no reason to live
Ill now have to cope
because your love you cant give
im sorry my love
that you life was so hard
but ill see you
in the end

[bloodredtears]

other than some typos this piece was great! i really enjoyed reading it a lot...short and to the point is always good

[Seth]

Indeed, simplicity and straight-forward is usually the best way, nicely written... Your words and flow were great.