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Post by alostandbrokensoul on Aug 5, 2004 12:51:23 GMT -5
Temptation temptation how I loath thee temptation temptation how you call to me the blade on my wrist cut by cut slit by slit blood races down my arm line by line drip by drip. Temptation temptation how I loath thee temptation temptation how you call to me the burning stove up on high sting by sting burn by burn burns cover my arm blister by blister mark by mark. Temptation temptation how I love thee temptation temptation how in pain you help me.
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Post by angel on Aug 9, 2004 21:58:01 GMT -5
Although this is extremely sad, this was a very enjoyable read. It is very strong in the beginning..and has a good ending...and it is just so true...tempation...it is.
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Seth
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Post by Seth on Aug 22, 2004 9:16:43 GMT -5
Yes, I agree. A very enjoyable read that I really felt emotion from. Nice flow and definitely delves you into temptation. Terrific write.
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