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Post by desecration on Jul 20, 2004 22:47:48 GMT -5
the crimson tipped fingers of fear slip into my dreams along with a chorus of the tortured and the damned. they speak of eternal winters of murderous heat, and stroke my mind to a flaring remembrance before dancing into the shadows; capturing my soul with arrows of breath-stealing lust and the seductive words of demons. the whispers of darkness breathe emotional clarity and deadly logic, gaining entry past my frail guards. a furious pressure thrums at my breast it refutes the precious pain, but with knives and nightmares they silently slaughter the final remnants of my heart. watery light sends them away, dawn’s hypocritical laughter soothing my wounds, allowing me breath before clouds and minions slide over the sun and leave me to battle the shades once more. they sigh on the fringes of my mind. they laugh as i break. they mock me in your eyes. they contort my prayers and drink my blood. it amuses them as i smile, as i feign perfect happiness. and when they are finally engorged with my manic defeat and internal alienation they release me, only to return to their violation as soon as i turn to the sanctuary of my dreams.
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Post by _black phoenix_ on Jul 21, 2004 3:51:57 GMT -5
Well done! This piece was extraordinary! I don't know what to say.. I can't even pick out my favourite parts because there are just so many..
Overall, this was a wonderful write. I enjoyed it very much. Bravo.
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Post by desecration on Jul 21, 2004 18:28:19 GMT -5
Thank you.
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Post by alostandbrokensoul on Jul 29, 2004 23:07:06 GMT -5
I have to agree is was a great write!!
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Eclipse
Apprentice
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Post by Eclipse on Jul 30, 2004 16:47:08 GMT -5
Damn, I envy you. Haha, you're able to capture feelings so well and get them on paper (or typed). Great piece.
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Post by desecration on Aug 1, 2004 22:28:52 GMT -5
thanks. i'm glad that y'all like it.
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