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Post by desecration on Jul 8, 2004 3:29:07 GMT -5
the gentlest of gazes that soothes when no other will becomes naught but a garden of rancid perverison embracing eagerly the mating of barbed wire and serpentine desecration when he looks away
the sensual lips that speak warmly of comfort harbor only the translations of demons making love to a language of withered roses and dying breath when he falls silent
the curve of an ear that listens to the faintest whisper is subjected to the keening gurgles of angels falling like rain from the sky crying of death and singing of fear when the world stills
the artists hands that steal away breath and tears are helpless but to paint vistas of mutilation crimson laughter and blackened rage dripping into the stream of life like disease through a population when his fingers find his scars
the perfect soul sighing of light's redemption and power breaks easily beneath the blissful insight that only darkness's jaded passion can impart he gravitates toward the torture, toward his ghosts lusting after his innocence that lays sighing in his blood a few paces away discovering forbidden pleasures and dreams of heaven when he remembers to breathe
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Seth
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when he
Jul 9, 2004 23:56:17 GMT -5
Post by Seth on Jul 9, 2004 23:56:17 GMT -5
Completely mind-blowing. Truly, this was worded incredibly well and so engrossing and terrifically structured. A true poem of utter perfection. The last stanza was my fav though, this whole piece was sheer excellence.
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when he
Jul 13, 2004 1:09:05 GMT -5
Post by desecration on Jul 13, 2004 1:09:05 GMT -5
thank you. im glad you liked it. i wrote it about a friend of mine.
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when he
Jul 20, 2004 14:57:18 GMT -5
Post by _black phoenix_ on Jul 20, 2004 14:57:18 GMT -5
Beautifully dark.
These lines really stuck out for me.. Magnificent wording.
Strong write, desecration. This is a piece to be proud of.
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when he
Jul 21, 2004 1:51:13 GMT -5
Post by desecration on Jul 21, 2004 1:51:13 GMT -5
thank you.
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