For Far To Long

[alostandbrokensoul]

I cant feel the pain
its all gone numb
like an immunity racing in my veins
knowing thats this is dumb
but I cant stop the cutting
it pulls at me
with myself i'm fighing
if they only could see
the blade just pulls
pulling me into temptation to cut
the pain it lulls
cutting my arms scarring my gut
Ive grown scorned by reality
I chose a wrong path
Ive been burdened with hostality
felt the blades wraith.
but the pain is gone
Ive grown immune
from cutting far to long
the numbness came to soon
I cant feel the pain
its all gone numb
I havent been able to feel the blade
for far to long.

I'm not really sure if this is the right catogorey(SP) for this but I put it here anyways.

[angel]

yep, this definitely fits this category. You brought a pretty sick picture in my head...and it sad how someone could be hurt so much that the pain doesnt phase them anymore...very sad. Rhyming didnt tickle me, but I still like it, nicely worded

[Seth]

Awesome write, really pulls you in and captivates you. Your emotion and words brought on some intense images to me and really hit hard.
Awesome write, I very much loved this one.