Eclipse
Apprentice
It's not a matter of luck, it's just a matter of time.
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Post by Eclipse on Jun 9, 2004 17:31:44 GMT -5
Good News For Baggy Pants
Screw eloquence and flattery Cause chivalry's long been dead. They're parasitic Sadistic Revolting eyes Succumbed to seductive hips and honey.
Pinching skin with eyelashes. Unable to taste the vinegar on their lips. The poignant taste Suboridinated by saccharine, acidic smiles. She hopes to feel like poison Antiseptic and unwanted. But instead she smells of pheromones And fresh-baked innocence.
Though she's ripening and souring Like fruit coming into age. She's forbidden, but there In broad daylight. Mistress of octaves and arachnid webs. Legs that don't seem quite right, And breasts high on her chest.
Maybe she wouldn't catch adulterous stares If her clothes didn't fit so tight.
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Post by angel on Jun 9, 2004 22:35:24 GMT -5
hmmm...a lot of big words. I like your last 2 lines...that made the most sense to me. This actually made me feel stupid because I didn't understand most of it...but it is still fun to read stuff with more intellectual meaning. Muy caliente
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Nuv
Novice
Vivi
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Post by Nuv on Jun 9, 2004 22:39:06 GMT -5
Dont feel bad about haveing to use a Dictonary ^^ it only makes you "Smarter"
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Post by angel on Jun 9, 2004 22:42:09 GMT -5
te he ...but sometimes...i'm too lazy lol
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Eclipse
Apprentice
It's not a matter of luck, it's just a matter of time.
Posts: 222
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Post by Eclipse on Jun 10, 2004 14:27:17 GMT -5
lol don't feel stupid. it's just all this metaphorical sh*t i wrote down...
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