NeverMore
Virtuoso
Beethoven Looking f*g
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Post by NeverMore on May 28, 2004 23:21:38 GMT -5
a second hand picture
hangs lonely on a wall
forgotten in a lonely house
no one lives here any more
everything has been taken
the truck has pulled away
trees, a river and a cabin
left hanging all alone
no more to hear chatter
as people with coffee chat
no children screaming about toys
not another Christmas
with a brightly lit house
just a lonely picture
on empty plaster walls
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Post by angel on Jun 1, 2004 13:58:02 GMT -5
I'm guessing you used the picture to symbolically represent you? Very sad...and a nice way to look at it. I really like this one too. Nice way to put how you feel
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Seth
Virtuoso
Root Beer Float
Play something country!
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Post by Seth on Dec 12, 2004 12:06:30 GMT -5
Very mesmorizing and captivating...
Intriguing write, truly!
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DeadByMorning
Novice
shattered in lies, looking up to the crimson sky...above all is peaceful
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Post by DeadByMorning on Dec 12, 2004 14:46:40 GMT -5
simply beautiful. Such a stunning...picture...is painted with the symbol of a picture. That was a bit redundant, but anyway. it's a very good piece, mesmerizing.
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