NeverMore
Virtuoso
Beethoven Looking f*g
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Post by NeverMore on May 25, 2004 0:30:56 GMT -5
(this is more longing then depression, but it needs to go somewhere *S*
Do you remember when all our tomorrows were yesterdays when we knew all there was to know we knew our love would span all time Time had no meaning you would love me until time started over do you remember when you said you'd be there always when we woke we would watch each other dream I said I would love only you until the moon ceased to be you said you'd hold my hand on the day I left this life
time took her bite you have gone from me we never took the chance we never had the courage do you hear the cannons blasting in the past the echo this love that drives me in the night still I am waiting you know I am here ready to begin on the day that you decide that dreams are made together for all of what we are for all of who we are
The earth can shake the waterfalls freeze let snow cover the mountains let the oceans change their tides learning to live learning to be I have learned you are my life I have found my world in you who I am is who I love who I love is who you are today I want your hand forever I want your love
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imaginary goddess #5
Novice
shape me into something I never will be, and you'll find out this facade was an escape from reality.
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Post by imaginary goddess #5 on May 25, 2004 20:30:27 GMT -5
i love the final stanza, though all of it was wonderful. it was more longing than depression - however, it was simply sweet and wonderful. exquisite. ~ Lianna ~ Imaginary Goddess #5
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Post by angel on May 31, 2004 2:47:56 GMT -5
ooooh its sad. This can lead you to be depressed...so I think its in the right spot. For some reason in became a song in my head...easy going in the beginning and screaming at me at the end..it was awesome
oh i have a question...what does *S* stand for? Sigh?
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NeverMore
Virtuoso
Beethoven Looking f*g
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Post by NeverMore on May 31, 2004 11:28:48 GMT -5
*S* = smile
I thank you for your words on this one. It would be interesting to hear it as a song, it played that way in my head a time or two as well
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