Mobious
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Post by Mobious on May 23, 2004 22:50:07 GMT -5
Trancended.
Standing here Within the light Awe encompassing Blinding brilliant Such vast light Trancendsion Finally trancended Into the light Beyond the shroud Beyond mortality Standing here Unable to see Not undifferent Utter blackness Dwelling within Such vast night Trancendsion Yet Still here Same shadows Are light and dark No difference In thinking Wishing To be back To live again Without trancendsion Be it white or black No difference Is such Standing there
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imaginary goddess #5
Novice
shape me into something I never will be, and you'll find out this facade was an escape from reality.
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Post by imaginary goddess #5 on May 25, 2004 20:36:03 GMT -5
"...beyond the shroud, beyond mortality..." = my fave lines! wonderful job - keep it up. great choice of words to create vivid imagery and thought-provoking of the reader.
~ Lianna imaginary goddess
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Post by angel on Jun 1, 2004 14:14:26 GMT -5
I need to read this a few more times to completely grasp it. But word choices are awesome in this.
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