The Fight Within Myself

[Horn]

The Fight Within Myself
The two me's are fighting furiously
In this brutal boxing match,
The hope is becoming desperate,
These two fighters, the world against hope,
Anything to hold on,
But the world is the champion,
He is beating the underdog,
The eye can still see,
See the evil all around,
See the other me,
The one who wants to end it all...
But my legs cannot move,
The legs that carry me forth through the fight,
My hands, the things that have me carry
Out my actions, they are bloody and sore,
The pain is becoming overbearing
Hope is becoming more and more dismal
As the fight continues...
I need to hurry...
Fear is overtaking me...
All I can do now is hope…

[angel]

Wow this is really deep. I can truly feel your pain. Very nicely worded. I like how you referred to the world as the champion. I really like this

[bloodredtears]

this is an amazing piece...i like the fight inside urself idea...many times we have to battle our wants against what we NEED...this is great...good job!