A Gentle Touch From You...

[Seth]

A gentle touch from you,
Lead to my demise,
Your voice uneasy,
With sympathy in your eyes.

A last weak kiss from you,
Before the cruelest outcome,
In a second the world fell,
You and I are over and done.

A small trinkle of rain,
As you pack up and leave,
No words exchanged,
While my heart starts to bleed.

A week now passed,
And you are knocking at my door,
With apologies and flowers,
But I'll take you back no more.

Another night I am alone,
When I could be with you,
But you and I cannot be,
For your love is not true.

A gentle touch from you,
Brought me so much pain,
But in the end,
You're the one lost in black disdain.

[Eclipse]

wow...i loved the story told in this and it's a fantastic ending.

[amberputis]

well this is sad, but i too like the story in this. keep it up

[Alex'z Death Chic]

I love this... it made me think of Gloria Gaynor's I Will Survive.. hehe...

[T.J. Barber]

Very nice write...I enjoyed the imagery and true devotion to the piece. I could feel your personality oozing from this piece. Great Job!

[Mikepoet]

I liked the flow of that one, the flow of loves pain.