Take this cup

[NeverMore]

take this cup from me
I do not want it anymore
I have given all there is to give
needing little in return
time has passed me by
loves walked in and walked away
hearts left to mend
without souls to guide them home
loving has been so hard
you give yet take away
leaving a need for lasting arms
that never goes away
someone to touch and care for
truth and peace within myself
take me while I am falling
let me land in pain no more
asked for my heart
I gave it freely to far
now I grasp to hold on
with not a should to understand
hope seems to fade
with every passing hour
all I do is struggle
to keep what I need to hold
I am but a man
weak in my stance
strengths robbed by pain
feeling the fight drain away

[angel]

NeverMore, you write in a way that I dont comprehend, and I dont understand. I am not saying that is a bad thing, I just have to try to understand your style of writing. It is unique, which is good. I can feel your sadness in this poem though. Hopefully some day I will grasp your meanings.

[NeverMore]

My dear Angel *S* If you can feel the sadness in the works that are meant to be sad, then you understand more then you know. For me, it is not the understanding the situation behind the words, but the transfer of feelings that is important. Though please, do keep trying to understand them *S* I enjoy your comments no matter what they are. And if I can answer a question my words bring out, I shall do so happily

[X x K e l Z x X]

Very good, I really liked this Joe