NeverMore
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Post by NeverMore on May 6, 2004 22:30:15 GMT -5
Last night I had a dream that all was right you took my hand walking along the beach as the sun was setting with the full moon rising the words we spoke of tomorrow and forever the dreams we have stories to tell the children
I woke to find you safe in my arms smiling in sleep dreaming of things yet untold I spoke to you as your eyes fluttered soft telling you of depth of my love that will last
then I opened my eyes with a smile on my lips knowing that soon these nights would be real with each and every sunrise your smile will touch me to begin each new day with a kiss from your lips
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Post by angel on May 8, 2004 17:26:14 GMT -5
aaaaaah, that is sad. I understood this one I feel special now, yes I do yes. I think this poem would more go under "heart scorned"...but it can equally be fit here. For yearning for someone can bring you to be depressed. Nice write
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NeverMore
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Post by NeverMore on May 9, 2004 22:51:50 GMT -5
I wrote this the day the one woman who I know could have made my life complete left. Which is why it is depressing to me. She is in my life still, but not how I or she wishes. Many many miles of ocean seperatae us. As do other things
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Post by angel on May 11, 2004 18:28:24 GMT -5
aaah, that is sad, I'm sorry
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