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May 5, 2004 7:35:11 GMT -5
Post by Alex'z Death Chic on May 5, 2004 7:35:11 GMT -5
My whole world is darkening
do I need a reason to be this way?
because I have no reason
I just am...
Coz I feel so empty
all of the sudden, everything's so f*cked up
and nothing matters
Do I need a reason to be this way?
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May 5, 2004 12:09:50 GMT -5
Post by Brady Kyler on May 5, 2004 12:09:50 GMT -5
You have a great deal of talent ADC
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May 5, 2004 13:43:46 GMT -5
Post by T.J. Barber on May 5, 2004 13:43:46 GMT -5
Very depressing. I enjoyed reading it. I feel for whomever this piece was written. Whether it be you or someone other, I wish them the best..
Very well written....TJ
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May 5, 2004 16:37:11 GMT -5
Post by bloodredtears on May 5, 2004 16:37:11 GMT -5
wonderful piece...i've felt numb upon occasion...in the first stanza i felt you were crying out to be understood for people just to accept you the way you are "do i need a reason to be this way" ...i love it...great job!
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May 5, 2004 22:54:35 GMT -5
Post by Alex'z Death Chic on May 5, 2004 22:54:35 GMT -5
BK, Thank you... You made me blush  TJ, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I didnt really write it for anyone. I was just depressed with no reason which happens to me a lot. Thanks for reading  BRT, I know everyone at one point felt the same way. Coz when you're numb inside... do you really need a reason to be that way? |
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