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Post by Alex'z Death Chic on May 5, 2004 7:27:47 GMT -5
Clawing my way to the top I struggle to catch a breath of air trapped within the walls of my heart searching for an escape out of here
Alone again in my pit of sorrow crying nothing but worthless tears once again I find myself wondering how long will I be left weeping here
I'm tugging at every stone trying so hard to find some way to get out to free myself from the prison of my soul yet all my efforts are in vain...
For I find no route, no path I've tried over and over again so hard my hands have been bled dry yet all my efforts are in vain...
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Post by Brady Kyler on May 5, 2004 12:09:27 GMT -5
ADC, great job as usual
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Post by T.J. Barber on May 5, 2004 13:41:53 GMT -5
Very Cool!
I enjoyed this piece very much. Keep up the good work...
TJ
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Post by bloodredtears on May 5, 2004 16:35:48 GMT -5
i really enjoyed this piece as well...it had a good rhythm and flowed wonderfully! good job!
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Post by Alex'z Death Chic on May 5, 2004 22:42:46 GMT -5
thank you, everyone...
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