Hunter
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Post by Hunter on May 4, 2004 5:12:05 GMT -5
Token Child
I wonder what her parents thought when they found their precious Token Child dead amidst the ruins of her material half life
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Post by bloodredtears on May 4, 2004 10:27:17 GMT -5
oooh...i really like this one a lot...especially the last line...great job!
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Post by X x K e l Z x X on May 4, 2004 18:18:03 GMT -5
very good, I really enjoyed this
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Hunter
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Post by Hunter on May 5, 2004 9:01:26 GMT -5
Thanks.
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Ice
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Post by Ice on May 6, 2004 2:44:49 GMT -5
Oh Hawk, this is just so depressing and sad! You arlight girl? don't hesitate to PM me if you ever wish to talk! This surfy can lend an ear!
Beautifully written and once again you blow me away.
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Hunter
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Post by Hunter on May 6, 2004 3:33:34 GMT -5
Thanks. Yeah, I'm fine. Us Westies are made of tough stuff.
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