Why What Who How When...Good Bye

[angel]

I'm sitting here~
A million people in front of me
None of them acknowledging~
I'm here
For I am nothing~
I am invisible
I scream~
And no one even flinches~
Not a head tilted
I cry silent tears~
Nobody asks whats wrong
I fall and hit my head~
I look up~
No hand reaching out
Why~
What~
Who~
How~
When~
Did this happen to me?
Did I do to deserve this?
Will finally be there for me?
Can I stand this anymore?
Will it all end?
Because if it doesn't soon~
Its the easy way out
I'm giving up~
Good bye

May 3, 2004

[bloodredtears]

i really like this piece...i like how you broke up the questions also...by putting the question words first and then finishing them later...cool stuff! great write!

[angel]

Ha, I didn't think anyone would figure that out. That's awesome that you did! Thank you

[X x K e l Z x X]

interesting format angel, nice write, I liked it

[angel]

thank you