Pit of Despair

[Horn]

Pit of Despair
I have fallen into
This pit of despair
My soul is filling with this
Desperate state of rage and depression

There is a faint trace of light,
In the crescent moon,
A sliver of hope amidst
The dismal darkness of the night

But dreary clouds hover overhead
With a dim air of uncertainty,
The rain is pouring down
Like the wet tears from above

I am alone in this pit,
I need someone to find me
And pull me out

I am searching so constantly,
But no one seems to care
Or bring me back to life,
For right now, I am dead...

[Seth]

A very true-to-life write, something I can totally relate to. Incredible write -the last lines were probably my favorite...

[bloodredtears]

this is an amazing piece of poetry...i have one that is similar to this in subject....i know that feeling of being alone in a pit with no one to rescue you...no one wanting to...great piece! keep up the great work!

[Horn]

thx kris, I can just hope that it gets better