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the raven sky Apr 28, 2004 22:47:46 GMT -5

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Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Apr 28, 2004 22:47:46 GMT -5

I fall into a raven sky
Too long have I wept
With eyes so dry
I cannot see
My wrong from right

You see it all
A vulture's stare
You burn so strong
The window to my soul is long gone
Embers remain

I fall into a new day
Though I cannot tell
If I am where I want to be
Or if I want to see
Ever again

'this life, well it's slipping right through my hands...these days turned out nothing like i had planned...'

Seth Virtuoso Root Beer Float Play something country! Posts: 411	the raven sky May 1, 2004 23:39:04 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Seth on May 1, 2004 23:39:04 GMT -5 The last stanza was probably my fav... Though the first two were wonderfully done.
	"I see the eternal misery. I feel the caress of beauty around me. I dream of the colors in your crystalized fantasy... Hoping one day, I'll be swept away from reality...

rinna(on leave...for eternity) Poet Laureate MIA Quitter surfninja Posts: 610	the raven sky May 2, 2004 1:03:42 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 2, 2004 1:03:42 GMT -5 seth, thanks! x rinna x
	'this life, well it's slipping right through my hands...these days turned out nothing like i had planned...'

Ice Novice Posts: 8	the raven sky May 6, 2004 3:39:46 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Ice on May 6, 2004 3:39:46 GMT -5 beautiful Rinna! absolutly wonderful! I know you write from past experiences and pain and all i can say is that i'm so glad that you have finally found your happiness and reason to open your eyes every day.
	Last Edit: May 6, 2004 3:40:43 GMT -5 by Ice To see the world in a grain of sand, and heaven in a wild flower, to hold infinity in the palm of your hand, and eternity in a hour. - william blake

rinna(on leave...for eternity) Poet Laureate MIA Quitter surfninja Posts: 610	the raven sky May 9, 2004 21:44:13 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 9, 2004 21:44:13 GMT -5 bree, love makes my head spin...i hope you find it one day too... x rinna x
	'this life, well it's slipping right through my hands...these days turned out nothing like i had planned...'

Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Apr 28, 2004 22:47:46 GMT -5

Post by Seth on May 1, 2004 23:39:04 GMT -5

Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 2, 2004 1:03:42 GMT -5

Post by Ice on May 6, 2004 3:39:46 GMT -5

Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 9, 2004 21:44:13 GMT -5