Horn
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Give me wings; I want to fly with someone by my side, wherever the wind takes us
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Apr 28, 2004 14:10:28 GMT -5
Post by Horn on Apr 28, 2004 14:10:28 GMT -5
Empty Alone in the world, No one to turn to…
Dreaming to be someone, But if you fail,
Where do you turn? Where do you go?
Success is what? It is full of power,
Not morals, not character, Not those you loved or brought up, Not who you are.
Trapped in a world Full of money and possessions.
Lusting at things and people That you know you can never have.
Always being rejected, Facing failures
Wanting more and more, With the human nature of selfishness.
All because of that feeling of emptiness That people think that they can
But never will fill. They try material, people, putting on masks, In their effort to change themselves, The ones they hate so dearly
But none of it works and you are back Where you started in the first place.
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Apr 28, 2004 21:42:40 GMT -5
Post by angel on Apr 28, 2004 21:42:40 GMT -5
Very nicely written. Strongly worded in most spots. Nice job.
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May 3, 2004 2:20:33 GMT -5
Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 3, 2004 2:20:33 GMT -5
enjoyed reading! x rinna x
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May 4, 2004 18:18:57 GMT -5
Post by X x K e l Z x X on May 4, 2004 18:18:57 GMT -5
Great write, Keep it up!
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Horn
Novice
Give me wings; I want to fly with someone by my side, wherever the wind takes us
Posts: 66
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May 4, 2004 18:20:51 GMT -5
Post by Horn on May 4, 2004 18:20:51 GMT -5
thx guys
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