Hunter
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Post by Hunter on Apr 21, 2004 19:54:58 GMT -5
Electricity
Do you remember
what it was like
when you first touched me
and that electricity
burned between us
think of that now
before you
give me back my keys
and walk out of my life
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Post by bloodredtears on Apr 21, 2004 23:35:04 GMT -5
beautiful piece...short and to the point...and the feeling in it is expressed well for how little time you have to express it...good job!
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Hunter
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Post by Hunter on Apr 21, 2004 23:36:37 GMT -5
Thank you.
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Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Apr 27, 2004 23:58:46 GMT -5
th,
nice write! short and sweet.
x rinna x
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Hunter
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Post by Hunter on Apr 28, 2004 0:42:25 GMT -5
Thank you Rinna  |
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Post by Mikepoet on May 5, 2004 20:19:12 GMT -5
.Sometimes the appeal goes away due to whatever
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Hunter
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Post by Hunter on May 6, 2004 3:30:21 GMT -5
Mike, so true.
Thank you.
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