Cut too Close

[unwritten]

Struck down again
The floor don’t feel so good
The ground so cold
The sky so close
I thought I was past it
Got over the turning point
I was free for a sec
Above the boundaries
Through the wired fence
But there are trap doors I didn’t see
Boundaries I didn’t predict
And they knocked me down again
Cut o close to no return
Unsure I can stand
Stranded in lock down
Where impossible
Is the only way
And hope is too scary a thing
To believe in

[angel]

that is EXACTLY how i feel right now and what I am going through right now. nicely worded.

[Eclipse]

i agree. the wording and flow is smooth.

Struck down again
The floor don’t feel so good
The ground so cold
The sky so close

wonderful opening lines.