Tell Me Why

X x K e l Z x X
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Tell Me Why Apr 19, 2004 20:00:50 GMT -5

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Post by X x K e l Z x X on Apr 19, 2004 20:00:50 GMT -5

Can you tell me why
You just had to lie
And tell me you loved me
Then you said goodbye

I don't quite understand
How such a wonderful man
Such as yourself
Could treat me so wrong
Over the telephone

It was over
Out of the blue
I didn't have a clue
I never thought that you
Would leave me so blue

Did you enjoy our time together
Or was it all just to make you feel better
Did you really use me
To get over her

I will always love you
You know that's true
But my heart is broken
Completely in two

~~KelZ~~

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bloodredtears Legend I don't entirely think I've had enough rum to allow that kind of talk. Posts: 1,164	Tell Me Why Apr 19, 2004 23:59:29 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by bloodredtears on Apr 19, 2004 23:59:29 GMT -5 wonderful piece!....i've never been in this situation, but i bet it hurts, i could feel ur pain and heartache..great job!
	Poetry copyright of Bloodredtears Summer has flown its nest, as the days swiftly turn to fall and we start to roost in the bosom of winter.

John Barnett Founders Founder Posts: 994	Tell Me Why Apr 20, 2004 14:46:39 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by John Barnett on Apr 20, 2004 14:46:39 GMT -5 This is a great one Kelz
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T.J. Barber Administrator Founder I would advise you to stay on my good side!!! Posts: 937	Tell Me Why Apr 27, 2004 0:05:30 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by T.J. Barber on Apr 27, 2004 0:05:30 GMT -5 This one struck home I think...I can feel personal emotions coming from this one....great imagery and rythym Kelly....very awesome write... Keep it up! TJ
	No man is an island in itself...Therefore, never send for whom the bell tolls. It tolls for the''

Mikepoet Virtuoso Posts: 487	Tell Me Why Apr 29, 2004 9:17:25 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Mikepoet on Apr 29, 2004 9:17:25 GMT -5 A true heartfelt poem. So sad.

Hunter Virtuoso Fallen Angel Posts: 287	Tell Me Why May 5, 2004 5:13:50 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Hunter on May 5, 2004 5:13:50 GMT -5 Very sad.
	Beneath this mask of sparkling words, I am nothing. So forgive me for raising your hopes.

Post by X x K e l Z x X on Apr 19, 2004 20:00:50 GMT -5

Post by bloodredtears on Apr 19, 2004 23:59:29 GMT -5

Post by John Barnett on Apr 20, 2004 14:46:39 GMT -5

Post by T.J. Barber on Apr 27, 2004 0:05:30 GMT -5

Post by Mikepoet on Apr 29, 2004 9:17:25 GMT -5

Post by Hunter on May 5, 2004 5:13:50 GMT -5