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Post by John Barnett on Apr 19, 2004 14:12:25 GMT -5
When I saw you cry I thought I would die I knew you were in pain And I felt the same Because when you are hurting So am I I'm always yearning To make it all right
I just want happiness for you For you to never be blue I live to see your pretty smile You make it all worthwhile I know I've hurt you before We've closed that door But I'll always be sorry to you For being such a fool
Baby I love you more than anything It's only you that can make my heart sing I need you in my life To be that shining light That saves me from myself We need each other's help To make it through the rain And to end all the pain
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Post by bloodredtears on Apr 19, 2004 23:57:15 GMT -5
beautiful piece john...i love all ur poetry, i don't think i'll ever be able to pick a favorite but i really like this one! great job!
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Post by John Barnett on Apr 20, 2004 14:49:51 GMT -5
Thank you Kris, those kind words mean the world to me, they give me the confidence to keep sharing my work with others.
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Post by Mikepoet on Apr 28, 2004 14:26:00 GMT -5
I enjoyed it as well. You touched several topics and kept it along the theme of how important she is to you.
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Post by Hunter on May 5, 2004 5:09:15 GMT -5
Well done.
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Post by John Barnett on May 5, 2004 15:28:12 GMT -5
Thank you all
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