Hunter
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Post by Hunter on Apr 20, 2004 2:01:45 GMT -5
Broken Wings
You laughed
that cruel little laugh
she knew so well
as you released her
from her cage
only to hold her down
and break her wings
before finally setting her free
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Post by bloodredtears on Apr 20, 2004 13:21:37 GMT -5
omg...this is a wonderful piece...i loved it beginning to end...so much meaning and hurt in one small piece...great job!
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Hunter
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Post by Hunter on Apr 20, 2004 17:09:07 GMT -5
Thank you.
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Post by angel on Apr 21, 2004 17:36:27 GMT -5
wow...that is horrible....wow....oh no horrible as in how-can-some-one-do-that horrible. VERY nicely written. wow....i have lack of words...wow....
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Post by Hunter on Apr 21, 2004 19:58:46 GMT -5
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