Puppet On A String

[DeadlySilence]

Just call me,
Your puppet on a string.
Just one pull of the string
And I'll do whatever you want.
You can play me whichever way you want
And there's nothing I can do,
But just obey.
No reason to try to fight,
Cuz you are the one in control.
I just act the way you want,
Every move I make is done by your hand.
It's always the same old dance,
To the same hurtful music.
Now, I'm wishing for someone
To come along
And cut me loose,
Cuz I'm so sick
Of being your puppet on a string.

4-19-2004

[John Barnett]

Very powerful and full of longing, this piece is emotion filled, very good.

[angel]

Deadly_Silence said:

It's always the same old dance,
To the same hurtful music.
Now, I'm wishing for someone
To come along
And cut me loose,

I really like your analogy of "puppet on a string." ^^ up there is my favorite part of this poem. That seemed the most intense of the whole things...everything else kind of seemed bla...But it is still good! I really like this, and I love the perspective on this. Nice job!~

Oh and I really like that picture also...very nice! Oh...and sorry its on here again...couldnt figure where to cut it off on the quote...and I have no time to fix it...sorry!

[DeadlySilence]

Thank you, John.

Thank you, Angel.

hugs to you both,
CJ