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Post by angel on Apr 18, 2004 13:13:41 GMT -5
I hurt- And I feel like I am going to die In a way I want to I feel so unloved I am all alone- And it doesn’t even seem that anyone- Cares I am in pain Emotionally- And physically This is a pain- A road- That no man should ever take But it’s not my fault- I was pushed And now they are throwing- The rocks of hate- At me I am such a baby- Look at me cry I should be ashamed of who I am- Who I have become But it’s not my fault- They pushed me Why did they have to push me? I don’t deserve this
10/26/03
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Post by bloodredtears on Apr 18, 2004 14:53:25 GMT -5
beautifully heart-wrenching poem angel...very deep feelings here...and i have felt this same thing sometimes...i hope things get better for you! this is wonderful writing!
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NeverMore
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Post by NeverMore on Apr 18, 2004 15:59:31 GMT -5
People push fault on to those who do not deserve it so often, always without thinking the should look to see where fault lay. In this work you captured that for me. I am glad to see someone has the words to say this. Now if people would just learn this. I love how you wrote this.. another awsome work!
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Post by angel on Apr 21, 2004 20:24:59 GMT -5
My poem got buried
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