NeverMore
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Beethoven Looking f*g
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Wind
Apr 17, 2004 22:24:05 GMT -5
Post by NeverMore on Apr 17, 2004 22:24:05 GMT -5
The wind blows light
when a night is quiet
the sky is dark
no moon in sight
there is no sound
the streets all deserted
a pin could drop
no one would hear
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Wind
Apr 18, 2004 0:03:57 GMT -5
Post by bloodredtears on Apr 18, 2004 0:03:57 GMT -5
another good piece...this one i think might fit better in the short forum cuz it doesn't seem so depressing to me also, a gentle reminder to limit urself to 3 poems in each forum per day, so others don't get bumped off the page...thanks  |
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Wind
Apr 18, 2004 0:22:01 GMT -5
Post by NeverMore on Apr 18, 2004 0:22:01 GMT -5
Sorry, I do get carried away at times *S*
as for the depression behind this peice, I can see where some will not see what the lonely feeling was behind this. It still depresses me when I read it as I remember all to well. I think it is one of those that it is how the reader feels when they read it. No one can feel the same as another I believe *S*
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Wind
Apr 18, 2004 10:34:31 GMT -5
Post by bloodredtears on Apr 18, 2004 10:34:31 GMT -5
i can see the loneliness in it, and the "no one would hear" line does convey that well, but for me a dark street is peaceful place for thinking, which does prove that its totally true that poetry can be interpreted broadly since we all feel different! that's what i love about it!
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