NeverMore
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Beethoven Looking f*g
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Post by NeverMore on Apr 17, 2004 1:31:22 GMT -5
when the morning comes light shines through time maoves slowly on as the new day begins
all through the night sounds drift with thoughts darkness gives way to the life that is so new
all these years of searching days filled with silence voices that never enter faces never seen
the eyes that place themselves within the thoughts of smiles the alarm sounds often scaring them away
down the lonely corridors through the rainy streets searching ever searching for where those dreams release
your hands reach out to touch a fleeting brush of light morning comes again to an empty room of day
a mind cries out in desperation where are you this day I've looked so many places in corners hidden deep away
these arms seek that one touch that life will say is true the hope within each of us that one will be the way
my heart grows cold and damp tired of always searching to have that one life to hold within my arms
so here I sit one more time looking for light eyes that deep within their brightness will be my truth and love
the one that knows not how to run away in fear the one who will stand their ground so I can be fullfilled
let me close this heavy door ti keep the pains away searching causes to much pain when all I see is hurt
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Post by bloodredtears on Apr 17, 2004 16:33:42 GMT -5
i really loved the first and last stanzas of this piece...great job!
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Seth
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Root Beer Float
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Post by Seth on May 3, 2004 13:09:34 GMT -5
This is truly an amzingly written piece. Fascinating and so very engrossing...
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Post by X x K e l Z x X on May 4, 2004 12:45:16 GMT -5
Very good NM, i like this
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