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Post by DeadlySilence on Apr 15, 2004 13:11:01 GMT -5

Stop your screaming!
I can’t take it anymore...
Don’t you see,
It’s getting you no where?
You’re only driving me farther away.

Look in my eyes!
I can’t take it anymore...
Can’t you see
That your harsh words
Are killing me?

Go away!
I can’t take it anymore...
Can’t you see,
That I don’t want to be here?
I only want a little peace.

Stop ignoring me!
I can’t take it anymore...
Can’t you see,
I am walking out on you?
Take a moment to understand...

Don’t cry!
I couldn’t take it anymore...
Why couldn’t you see?
I needed to know you loved me,
But you were too proud...

I’m sorry!
I couldn’t take it anymore.
I tried to make you see,
But you made yourself blind.
Now, all you see is me - DEAD.

4-15-2004

X x K e l Z x X Chapter Leader Just Me Posts: 1,035	Refuse To See Apr 16, 2004 14:39:00 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by X x K e l Z x X on Apr 16, 2004 14:39:00 GMT -5 Wow, extremely powerful, especially the end, good one CJ.
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DeadlySilence Guest	Refuse To See Apr 16, 2004 15:09:53 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by DeadlySilence on Apr 16, 2004 15:09:53 GMT -5 Thank you.

bloodredtears Legend I don't entirely think I've had enough rum to allow that kind of talk. Posts: 1,164	Refuse To See Apr 17, 2004 16:26:48 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by bloodredtears on Apr 17, 2004 16:26:48 GMT -5 i really love how you boldened the first line of each stanza... the piece was amazing...great job!
	Poetry copyright of Bloodredtears Summer has flown its nest, as the days swiftly turn to fall and we start to roost in the bosom of winter.

DeadlySilence Guest	Refuse To See Apr 17, 2004 19:21:25 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by DeadlySilence on Apr 17, 2004 19:21:25 GMT -5 Thank you!

Hunter Virtuoso Fallen Angel Posts: 287	Refuse To See Apr 20, 2004 2:05:47 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Hunter on Apr 20, 2004 2:05:47 GMT -5 Excellent.
	Beneath this mask of sparkling words, I am nothing. So forgive me for raising your hopes.

DeadlySilence Guest	Refuse To See Apr 20, 2004 11:35:11 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by DeadlySilence on Apr 20, 2004 11:35:11 GMT -5 Thank you, Hawk.

Post by DeadlySilence on Apr 15, 2004 13:11:01 GMT -5

Post by X x K e l Z x X on Apr 16, 2004 14:39:00 GMT -5

Post by DeadlySilence on Apr 16, 2004 15:09:53 GMT -5

Post by bloodredtears on Apr 17, 2004 16:26:48 GMT -5

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Post by Hunter on Apr 20, 2004 2:05:47 GMT -5

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