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Realization Apr 12, 2004 16:55:45 GMT -5

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Post by angel on Apr 12, 2004 16:55:45 GMT -5

The heart stops-
Blood rushes on
Brain shuts down
Eyes close
Skin goes cold
Light disappears
Feeling of loneliness
Air rushes through the face-
Big breath of air-
Eyes open-
And everything-
Is normal

9-23-03

for some reason, I really like this face: :-[

lol

T.J. Barber Administrator Founder I would advise you to stay on my good side!!! Posts: 937	Realization Apr 13, 2004 20:02:37 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by T.J. Barber on Apr 13, 2004 20:02:37 GMT -5 Very well written Angel. I enjoy your poetry more and more each time I read it. Very good Job. I apologize that noone replied sooner. Great Job! TJ
	No man is an island in itself...Therefore, never send for whom the bell tolls. It tolls for the''

bloodredtears Legend I don't entirely think I've had enough rum to allow that kind of talk. Posts: 1,164	Realization Apr 17, 2004 16:22:23 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by bloodredtears on Apr 17, 2004 16:22:23 GMT -5 i like how you seem to "wake up" almost and find everything back to normal....wish that the world could be that way! great job!
	Poetry copyright of Bloodredtears Summer has flown its nest, as the days swiftly turn to fall and we start to roost in the bosom of winter.

Post by angel on Apr 12, 2004 16:55:45 GMT -5

Post by T.J. Barber on Apr 13, 2004 20:02:37 GMT -5

Post by bloodredtears on Apr 17, 2004 16:22:23 GMT -5