No Wonder

[unwritten]

No matter how much I try
Sometimes I still fail
No matter how much I cry
I can't make them care

No matter how much I love
Some still don't react
No matter how mean I am
Some keep coming back

No matter how much I run
The chains still closing in
No matter how much I dream
There still illusions

No wonder I stopped trying
So now I can't fail
No wonder I stopped crying
Cause they still don't care

No wonder I stopped loving
For they don't react
No wonder I'm not mean now
So they don't come back

No wonder I stopped running
The chains are now closed
No wonder I keep dreaming
For its my only loop hole

[angel]

very nicely written. I really like it.

Third stanza:
"There still illusions"

Did you mean to say that? Or did you miss a word or something? Because it doesnt really make sense to me. Who knows, it could just be something away from my comprehension.

Its so sad that you have to give up on everything...I did the exact same thing. I never thought I could put it in words, but you did. Very nice job!

[T.J. Barber]

I enjoyed it. It told a very true story. No one is perfect and that is solemn truth. Noone can do everything right. Great Job, Tj

[John Barnett]

Very good and very true, nice job!