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Post by GPRacer on Mar 31, 2004 8:07:31 GMT -5
We're lucky to live this way some people can't make it through every day
i all around hate being alone the only time i get to talk to my own dad is over the phone
we never have time to do stuff all this plus school makes life tough
i can't fully express mysel in a poem but it's the best thing making my heart feel at home.
sometimes i dunno what to do or where to go i wish ONE day i could just RELAX or even enjoy some snow.
a lot of times i wish i could just let go of it all. But only to know i'd take a non-recoverable fall.
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Post by bloodredtears on Mar 31, 2004 19:32:46 GMT -5
i know how this goes...well most of it anyway...except for me i can't get away from my parents enough....great job! you express urself very well...
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Post by Hunter on Apr 2, 2004 7:54:39 GMT -5
You express yourself well.
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Post by SilverEyes on Jun 14, 2004 15:51:42 GMT -5
Interesting wording but some of the words seemed superfluous though. Anyway, I like the format and the flow.
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