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Post by Mikepoet on Mar 24, 2004 19:57:36 GMT -5
I’ve a collection of tears of sorrow, always kept those of joy. Have kept them since I became a man, kept some when I was a boy.
My tears are tucked away in notebooks. Sad love letters smeared liquid blue. Life’s romantic enchantments, have rhymed more than a time or two.
Sometimes rhymed happy moments. When all around me gleamed. Other times rhymed disenchantments, heart felt poems of pain I’ve seen.
If I have posted this I do not remember...I looked and cannot find it here...
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Post by bloodredtears on Mar 25, 2004 4:22:47 GMT -5
i don't remember this one....so it must be new...i really like this..because that is how i am with my poetry...my poems are my tears....great job!
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Post by Mikepoet on Mar 25, 2004 11:57:50 GMT -5
Thank you and I am glad you can relate..
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Post by X x K e l Z x X on Mar 27, 2004 13:12:22 GMT -5
Great write Mike, I enjoyed this one too!
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Post by Mikepoet on Mar 27, 2004 14:34:57 GMT -5
Thank you..always a pleasure to say thank you to this.. ;D
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Post by Sathien on Mar 28, 2004 1:51:58 GMT -5
i love this. soooo true. kudos!
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Post by Mikepoet on Mar 28, 2004 10:56:21 GMT -5
;DThank you..
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Chaotic_Thetis
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Bleed me! For i have witnessed yet remained silent.Slay me! For i had your love and kept it.
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Post by Chaotic_Thetis on Mar 30, 2004 13:32:09 GMT -5
This was interesting, i especially liked the opening stanza, the reference to being a boy and so on. Nicely written ^_^
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Post by Mikepoet on Mar 30, 2004 23:48:18 GMT -5
I started out as a Child. ;D
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Post by SilverEyes on Apr 4, 2004 2:48:51 GMT -5
Wow, I love and...and...ARGH! I can't explain why.
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Post by Mikepoet on Apr 4, 2004 12:19:30 GMT -5
Thank you and so ditto to the unexplained and its my stuff even!! :-XMe hugging me here.
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