Trapped

[Tania]

Treasure my heart, my love
For it bleeds in hours
While you sleep and I watch
To touch your face with my breath
Calm as a baby - you sleep undisturbed
My thoughts run like a girl through woods...
Or baying at the moon, a silent wolft
trapped within her own making
To touch you with soft passion
Soft as a butterfly, to not wake
- "the sleeping prince"
You turn and reach for me
Like a child for his mother
Stroke for stoke - your lover
I kiss you into awakening
Your eyes flutter, you see my face
I smile, my thoughts a secret, as my soul
quietly dies
I sleep into a dream of nightmares and watch
My keeper, your private prisoner-Tania Walsh-
Critique and rate me

[bloodredtears]

um...well up until about the last couple lines i had no idea that it was depressed...seemed more romantic to me...very good use of deception there...i enjoyed the last line...i'm no good at rating stuff..but i did like this one alot...good job

[X x K e l Z x X]

Wonderful write, keep it up Tania, this was good.

[Seth]

Mmhm, totally agree with Zephyr and it did have a slight romantic feel, wonderful indeed.

[Tania]

Thank you all for your kind comments
Tania