Last Part of Me

[Seth]

What is this new evasive nature that has been instilled in me?
What has become of the old semi-pleasant me?
Why have I started tearing down my walls, only to be this hurting fiend?
Why is it that I, have become so angry?

If it is not the reason I am heartbroken,
The tell me what else it could be, other than heartbroken.
Am I turning into you?
Am I becoming the monster I wanted always hidden?

This thing I tried to hide deep within myself,
Something I didn't want anyone to see, so I buried it in myself.
This part of me- born from pain and sadness,
Has come forth and shown itself.

This other side of me, that I so much despise
Filled with the animosity for all that I despise.
Tell me it's normal to hide a part of oneself,
A part without heart, with the blankest of eyes...

But now that I face it, how deep in sadness I'm in,
For I never really hid it completely- I've shown it in.
My sarcasm and sighs, my whole life,
Everything I've done is tainted with what I held within.

The final part of me, that would have made me whole,
Is exactly what I withheld and why I was never whole.
I am only anger and pain,
And now I feel nothing but the sadness I lost long ago...

[T.J. Barber]

Very nice piece. Dark and dismal....I liked it. It's ora and feel made a scene. Good Job

[bloodredtears]

uh...i read this a while ago but forgot to post a reply....oops...well i re-read it and i still hold that it is a wonderful piece...the entire thing is good...i don't have any one fav...great job!

[Chaotic_Thetis]

Felt like a short act was playing out here, nicely written and the ending felt somewaht tragic.

[X x K e l Z x X]

Very tragic piece, darkened, yet great!

[SilverEyes]

Interesting write and a message that one should keep nothing hidden, even from oneself because it will always come back to haunt you. I like the flow and it didn't seem forced with the rhyming.