Avatre
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Just around for the words...^.^
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Post by Avatre on Jan 8, 2004 16:03:26 GMT -5
Picture Perfect
The picture is a perfect moment That is caught for eternity A smiling girl No one sees the darkness that haunts her And the tears she cries at night Where no one sees her
The picture doesn't show Why she's scared of the dark The sorrow is not painted Upon the picture's bright color The pain and scars are not there Nothing behind that happy face
In the picture's sharp details Doesn't reveal Why she doesn't want to go home The shining eyes so full of life Don't show why she wants to die
In a picture Things can be perfect Frozen to keep a moment And not see what lies beyond
A/N: Hmm...trying this for the first time...I'm not even sure if I'm doing this right -_-'' ah well, let's experiment!
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Post by bloodredtears on Jan 8, 2004 17:19:22 GMT -5
i really like this poem..it's quite true...especially when a person gets really good at showing people what they want them to see, not what they actually feel...good job!
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Post by SilverEyes on Jan 20, 2004 1:43:32 GMT -5
Very, very nice. I think it turned out rather well for an experiment.
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Post by T.J. Barber on Jan 20, 2004 16:32:57 GMT -5
This was a great poem. Very heartfelt and very true as well. The truth of it is what brought it out. Every moment in my life has been Picture Perfect. Great Job,
Tj
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