What my suicide note would say

[alostandbrokensoul]

ehh its ok

To my parents and my family, i chose to die
To my parents and my family i ask you not to cry
To my parents and my family ive always hated life
To my parents and my family im sorry i caused you strife
To my parents and my family I told you the truth
To my parents and my family you thought it was my youth
To my parents and my family im sorry if i cause you pain
To my parents and my family im the one to blame
To my parents and my family im glad that i died
To my parents and my family dont worry i havent cried
To my parents and my family again i ask you not to bawl
To my parents and my family F*ck you all.

[Mwalvbk]

With the exception of the constant repitition, the piece is very good. The words flow well and rhyme well also. Very tragic and powerful, keep it up!

[X x K e l Z x X]

This is very eyecatching and well written...but I do believe the repitition serves a purpose here.

[rinna(on leave...for eternity)]

i have to agree with zephyr here, any longer though and the repitition may have been a bit TOO repetitive.

well done.

[Outcast]

IT WAS GOOD in away but i did not get your point

[Angel Of Music]

i have always liked this one