The price of a gun took the life of one

[sterling06]

Someone was taken from the world today
a friend of my sisters she visited each day.
I was shock to hear the news and
my stomach was turning, dazed and confused.
How someone she knew a minute ago
is nothing more but a lifeless crow.
A bullet struck him with unbounding force and pierced
through his skin with no regrets nor remorse.
And now his family lay down weaping,
still trying to understand why he's not in their
safekeeping.

to my sister and her friends family

[bloodredtears]

awww...this is such a sad piece...but you wrote it beautifully...keep up the great work!

[rinna(on leave...for eternity)]

this is terribly sad. a beautiful write though, i'm sure your sister would love it. violence i will never understand. i don't want to understand it.
x rinna x

[alostandbrokensoul]

This is an extremly sad poem but well righten as well I'm sorry for your sister and her friends family as well as her friends this was a great poem keep up the work