internal monologue of a lovelfool

[pig]

say hello. look at her eyes.
unsure what colour they're trying to hide.
to music that floats, she blinks in time,
into then through her hair entwined

ill try to think
like i always do.
but i dont mind forever
to think in time with you.

should i move on in to another life?
graciously fall from a fearful height.
feels wrong to me that this feels right,
so foolish
so sue me
i know you might.

and ill try to think
(like i always do)
but it might tke forever
to think in time with you
(i dont mind)

she walks all day inside my head
with trails of light left wherever she treads
she'll lead me to words that have never been said
i want you
to love me
like the living dead

once more i awake to (once more i forget)
find function, destruction from marijuana cigarettes.
upsetting myself through re-living regret
soon lose
all emotion
to my oxygen debt.

and i try to think
but never do.
i just want you
to love me
like i want to
love you.

[Eclipse]

another amazing piece.

should i move on in to another life?
graciously fall from a fearful height.
feels wrong to me that this feels right,
so foolish
so sue me
i know you might.

the flow in that is masterful.

[pig]

admittedly i do like the sound of:

"feels wrong to me that this feels right,
so foolish
so sue me
i know you might."

just because i thought it sounded funny but appropriate in the middle of a love song.

thanks eclipse. im glad you enjoyed

[amelie]

abeautiful gem ofa poem. so witty and funny and lso poignant. i love the tongue in cheek aspects because they lift it from being angsty. lovely work ..as usual my love

[Mikepoet]

This was beautifully written, please do not take a tumble..then I could not watch you grow as a poet..selfish I am..You will most surely giva many a poetry reader pleasured moments of muse.