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BlackRainbow
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Der Engel Schw?rzung

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Source of Silence Apr 20, 2004 22:07:13 GMT -5

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Post by BlackRainbow on Apr 20, 2004 22:07:13 GMT -5

Her clothes are dark
Her hair is black
She walks with the cold wind
Against her back

With blood to spill
A smile that could kill
She walks in the darkness
Against her own will

No man at her side
In the darkness she will hide
Killing everything in her path
She'll rip you from the inside

An expression so blank
Your soul she will take
Killing all that moves
She'll always be awake...

:)http://darknesspoet.proboards23.com:)

Alex'z Death Chic Apprentice \|\| Looks can be deceiving \|\| Posts: 241	Source of Silence Apr 21, 2004 4:53:09 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Alex'z Death Chic on Apr 21, 2004 4:53:09 GMT -5 the flow was good... just a lil off at some places... nice write
	I'm a bad girl only when bad boys want me bad

BlackRainbow Novice Der Engel Schw?rzung Posts: 15	Source of Silence Apr 21, 2004 11:57:47 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by BlackRainbow on Apr 21, 2004 11:57:47 GMT -5 ::)Sorry i wrote this when i was a lot younger. So where was i off...just so i know for the future. You know some people read their poetry different...
	Last Edit: Apr 21, 2004 11:58:28 GMT -5 by BlackRainbow :)http://darknesspoet.proboards23.com:)

Mikepoet Virtuoso Posts: 487	Source of Silence May 6, 2004 22:01:05 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Mikepoet on May 6, 2004 22:01:05 GMT -5 I liked it.

rinna(on leave...for eternity) Poet Laureate MIA Quitter surfninja Posts: 610	Source of Silence May 7, 2004 2:48:42 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 7, 2004 2:48:42 GMT -5 i enjoyed it! x rinna x
	'this life, well it's slipping right through my hands...these days turned out nothing like i had planned...'

Post by BlackRainbow on Apr 20, 2004 22:07:13 GMT -5

Post by Alex'z Death Chic on Apr 21, 2004 4:53:09 GMT -5

Post by BlackRainbow on Apr 21, 2004 11:57:47 GMT -5

Post by Mikepoet on May 6, 2004 22:01:05 GMT -5

Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 7, 2004 2:48:42 GMT -5